Excerpt from Powerone’s latest novel, Final Surrender
It had been years since she was home. Carrie was ashamed she wasn’t there when her
mother died. The end came quickly, one
minute her mother was in the hospital with Carrie hurrying to finish last
minute loose ends so she could visit, the next minute she was listening to the
news. Her mother had passed away last
night. Carrie still didn’t understand
all of the circumstances but it was too late for anything but regrets. She was gone. Carrie was finally going home,
not to visit, but to bury her mother and settle her estate.
Carrie’s father disappeared from both of their
lives when she was small. Her mother
tried to raise Carrie the best she could, but they disagreed more and more as
Carrie became a teenager. Most girls disagreed
with their mothers, but their relationship became strained. At the young age of
seventeen, Carrie suddenly left home one night.
It was three years before Carrie contacted her mother and the first
meeting was hard for both of them.
Carrie stayed in contact with her mother after that, but it was mainly
by telephone once a month and only one trip back home. That trip was two years ago, Carrie had
surprised her mother at Christmas time.
She should have recognized the difference, her mother was looking older
and tired, but Carrie didn’t say anything.
Carrie stayed a week and then left the small town on the
At five feet six inches, her red hair made her
stand out in a crowded room. It was the
richest, deepest red, and her skin was pale and flawless. Her figure had
bloomed at an early age, full firm breasts almost out of place on a
fifteen-year-old girl. Her hips matured
and with a tight ass, she swayed seductively, though Carrie failed to recognize
the effect she had on men. She left town
the first time before she could get into too much trouble, but on her last
visit, she was not so lucky. Now
twenty-five, Carrie grew more beautiful each year. Her thick, lush hair shined deep red in the
sun and set off her pale white skin. She
wore dark sunglasses to cover her eyes.
She still dressed rather modestly,
moving to another small town after leaving
She had been home for four days, that last trip,
finally going out on Friday night. Her
mother had been too much to take that many days in a row. What friends she had when she was young had
long left the small town for the opportunities of the big city. She went to Rascal’s, one of the small bars
clustered on
“Scotch and soda,” she said to the bartender, an
older man, probably the owner. “And good
scotch,” she added as he went to pick up the generic scotch bottle. He picked up the ten-year-old scotch, poured
a generous shot and then a shot of club soda on the ice. He put it down on a cocktail napkin in front
of her. Carrie slipped a twenty-dollar
bill onto the bar.
“It’s taken care of,” he said, pushing her twenty
back at her. “It’s not often we get
anything as sweet as you in here. I
don’t think your money will be any good tonight.” She would be good for business, the guys
would flock to his place if she came in every night. He hadn’t seen her before, though she did
look familiar. He just couldn’t place
her. He left her alone, many of the male
patrons eager to slide into the empty seat next to her.
“Now I would have remembered a pretty little thing
like you,” said a man’s voice with the familiar Southern drawl that she
remembered. She looked at him, an older
man, early forties, a local by his demeanor.
He sat on the stool next to her, his eyes on her near naked legs, making
no attempt to hide his blatant lust.
“Just visiting,” she nodded to him. “Am I to thank you for this drink?” She figured the first one to slide up to the
bar would be the one that bought the drink.
“I couldn’t let you buy your own drink. That would be a sin.” His eyes moved up to the thin sweater that
would do little to keep her warm, but did an excellent job of highlighting her
firm breasts. She was a real prize for
this time of year. He shifted in the bar
stool, his cock was bunched up in his pants, but he was afraid of being so
crude to shift it around while she was watching.
It never bothered her that she attracted older men,
in fact she tended to like them better.
Boys her age tended to only want to get into her panties. Once their lust was satisfied, she would find
their interests in her fading fast. Older men tended to lavish more attention on
her, wanting to please her before they were pleasured. However, they all wanted their pleasure from
her. She had read many psychology books,
sure that there was hidden meanings in all of this. Carrie was looking for a father figure that
had been missing from her life, commitment issues, older men were more likely
to be married and did not want a firm commitment. She never believed any of them. She just liked the attention. And this one was definitely paying lots of
attention to her, his eyes traveling over her body. “Carrie,” she said pushing her hand out to
him.
“Jessie,” he said taking her soft hand in his,
feeling her firm grip, wishing it was gripping his cock instead of his
hand. “Nice grip. I like a woman that can hold things tight,”
hoping that she would get the sexual innuendo. Could he get lucky with such a
hot young thing tonight, his cock kept jerking in the tight confines of his
jeans? He was still in good shape
for his age, handsome and single as of last year when his wife left him for
good. It was because of his love of
work, not another woman that drove her off.
He finally released her hand, Carrie was trying to
ignore his blatant sexual overture. It
was too early and she did not have enough liquor in her system to even think
about such a thing. She looked at him,
handsome in a rugged sort of way. He
kept good care of his body, his arms still bulging with muscles, his jeans
tightly drawn over firm thighs. Whatever
he did, he did it well. She had to catch
herself from looking down at the front of his pants. That would be too bold. “You live on
“For a year or so.”
Jessie responded, not wanting to tell much about himself. The locals knew what he did, it was rare
during the winter that he could find a woman that didn’t know and wouldn’t be
put off by his occupation. “Are you
staying in town long?”
“One or two more days then I have to go home.” The bartender turned on the jukebox, a few
couples were already dancing to the slow music he picked out. Carrie almost thought she could see the
lights dimming.
“How about a dance?” Jessie didn’t wait for an answer, gripping her
hand, his eyes on her legs as he turned her until she moved off the bar stool,
a generous amount of bare leg revealed made his cock jump in pleasure.
She found herself pulled to the small dance floor
near the jukebox, Jessie didn’t give her a chance to reply before his arms were
around her waist, drawing her body flush against his. For someone his size, she found him fluid on
the dance floor, gliding gently along to the music. His hands held her firmly against him, the
unmistakable bulge in his pants pressed hard against her. It had been a while since she felt a man’s
hard cock pushed against her, not an altogether uncomfortable feeling. Or an unwelcome one.